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<Three camps: Camp big Apple, Ranch West Camp, Head Start Splash>

   What would you choose if you had to choose a camp among the three camps? I would choose Camp Big Apple. Do you want to know why? Then keep reading!
   First, unlike other camps, it's held in America! merica. What can you think about when you hear the word America? First language1 The purpose of English camps are to improve English skills! America is a really good place to improve your English skills. However, this camp only studies for important tests suh as S.A.T. but doesn't get to study any other subjects. On the other hand, Ranch West Camp can choose subjects that you want to study, do you get to learn more and get freedom to choose with a smile on your face.
   Second, Camp BIg Apple has trustworthy teachers. Head Start Splash have philipins local teachers. However, Camp Big Apple hyave teachers who are Korean with at least Master's degrees.
   Thid, parents are the problem. In English camp just lik GLPS, you don't need to stay with parents so many people who came to GLPS say that it was helpful and now some of them are in KMLA. Also in Camp
Bid Apple, it's a dormitory situation unlike the Head Start Splash. In Head Start Splash, parents have to stay together.
   In conclusion, I think Camp Big Apple is the best.

Skill Post ② < summarize & paraphrase 4...>

1st- [Shark attacks] summarize

Many people are afraid of sharks. But you don't need to be. Because there's more opportunity to be killed by drowning and lightening than being killed by a shark in the ocean. To give you tips not to get killed by a shark in the ocean, ① Travel in a group.② Don't to into the water if you have a hurt on your body because sharks have a good sense of smell.

2nd- [4th paragraph of bear attacks] paraphrase

In Yellowstone National Park in the U.S statistics show that there are more chances to be drown than being killed by a bear. Between 1839~ 1994, 101 people died from drowning. However, only 5 people died from bear attack.

3rd- [My Experience] summarize

One day, I was going down the stairs after going to the bookstore. I was jumoing down the stairs and a bad result came to me. I fell down and it started to bleed. It bleeded a lot. Few weeks later, I was running with my friend in  school, and I hurt the same place! It was really painful.

4th- [Penguin: Source; www.livescience.com/topics/penguins/

Penguins are aquatic, flightless birds! They lay eggs, have feathers, and they are powerful swimmers. The Emperor penguin can stay underwater for 30 minutes long. They live in Southern Hemisphere including Artarctica and New Zealand.

Fun Post....Drama: Boys over flowers.

BOYS OVER FLOWERS!!!!!!!!!!!
It's a drama which my favorite actor Lee Min Ho!!!

In Boys over flowers, there is a fake group called F4. In F4, There is Gu Goon Pyo(Lee Min Ho), Yoon Ji Hoo(Kim Hyung Joong), So Ii Jung(Kim Bum), Song U Bin(Kim Joon)... They are all very handsome..FOr this drama, there is a lot of OST but I like the one called "Stand By Me" most. Here's the video:

(From left) Gu Goon Pyo(Lee Min Ho), Yoon Ji Hoo(Kim Hyung Joong), So Ii Jung(Kim Bum), Song U Bin(Kim Joon) In this group Lee Min Ho is the leader.

picture: http://www.time.com/time/photogallery/0,29307,1626519_1373690,00.html


   This is a picture of  Indian Family. And I am the girl which is at the end on the left side(for fake). Today, I am going to tell you about our food per week. We eat a lot.
   Yesterday, in the moning we ate scramble egg. We always don't forget to eat fruits. Yesterday we ate orange and banana for fruit desert. Oh, and we ate some mlk too! We are kind of rich so we eat a lot. We usually have some flat breadfs with cury sauce but it was just yeaterday that we ate in a different way. I think I prefer the flat bread with cury sauce. I think I prefer them because it's our country food and I used to eat those a lot since I was young.
   For lunch, I ate what I expected to eat and what I wanted to eat. Cury sauce with flat bread!!^^ It was very good! I liked my food!!
   Yesterday meal was nice and I would like to eat my country food again until I die!^^

Fun Post.....pop song contest.

Last week Saturday, we had a pop song contest. And our class won!!!! We sang Tik Tok by Kesha...
Here's the song:

Fun post...------- Lee Min ho

Hello~~~
I'm going to talk about my favourite actor Lee Min Ho!!!!!!
Min Ho is 187cm tall...He's very tall!!!
Plus, he is very handsome!!!


He was on the drama called: Boys over flowers, personal likes, and city hunter.
He was on the movie called: Kangcheoljung, and Our school Et.
He was born in 1987 June 22th..
   I like him very much because of three reasons. He is handsome, good at acting as an actor, and he is very tall.
  

Skill post 1 < compare and contrast essay >

-compare and contrast-

Camp big apple
-Held in America
-Prepare for important Enlish test such as SAT.
-Live in dormitorie with other students from arounjd the world.
-Has other activity
-trustworthy teaches.
-don't get to study other thing but test.

Ranch West Camp
-Held in Cananda
-Students can choose the subjects they want to study
-homestay sitiation
-Has outside activity
-Don't get to study variety of things because you choose the subject to study.

Head  start splash
-Held in Phillipins(Cebu)
-International school.
-taught by local teachers
-one parent must acompany each student to camp at a small apartment near beach
-10 minutes to beach so it distracts the studying
-Has outside activity


   I am going to write a compare and comtrast essay about the camps above. Weel, for me I think Camp big apple is the best camp. Here's the reason why:
   First, truthworthy teachers are there in America to teach. The teachers are taught by Korean professors with at least a master degree. However, others are not! If we are going to a ENglish camp or any other camp, I think teachers are one thing to consider about.
   Second, the country children have to stay in!! America!! It's a great place to study English as a seecond language! For example, my friend , she went to America ang she improved her English skills a lot.
   Third, staying with parents! In the camp which is hld in Phillipins, the parents stay near the children so children might not try as hard as when their parents are far or not with them.My friend told me that she wnats to try harder when parents are far away because she wants to surprise her parents how her English skills improved.
   These were the reasons why I like the Camp Big Apple the most. Also, I was comparing and contrasting the camps as I explained why I like Camp big apple. Thank You.