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<Three camps: Camp big Apple, Ranch West Camp, Head Start Splash>

   What would you choose if you had to choose a camp among the three camps? I would choose Camp Big Apple. Do you want to know why? Then keep reading!
   First, unlike other camps, it's held in America! merica. What can you think about when you hear the word America? First language1 The purpose of English camps are to improve English skills! America is a really good place to improve your English skills. However, this camp only studies for important tests suh as S.A.T. but doesn't get to study any other subjects. On the other hand, Ranch West Camp can choose subjects that you want to study, do you get to learn more and get freedom to choose with a smile on your face.
   Second, Camp BIg Apple has trustworthy teachers. Head Start Splash have philipins local teachers. However, Camp Big Apple hyave teachers who are Korean with at least Master's degrees.
   Thid, parents are the problem. In English camp just lik GLPS, you don't need to stay with parents so many people who came to GLPS say that it was helpful and now some of them are in KMLA. Also in Camp
Bid Apple, it's a dormitory situation unlike the Head Start Splash. In Head Start Splash, parents have to stay together.
   In conclusion, I think Camp Big Apple is the best.